To see how
these techniques work, try the sample essay below:
One of the most persistently
troubling parts of national domestic policy is the development
and use of water resources. Because the technology of water management
involves similar construction skills, whether the task is the
building of an ocean jetty for protection of shipping or the
construction of a river dam for flood control and irrigation,
the issues of water policy have mingled problems of navigation
and agriculture. A further inherent complexity of water policy
is the frequent conflict between flood control and irrigation
and between requirements for abundance and those for scarcity
of water. Both problems exist in America, often in the same river
basins; the one is most typically the problem of the lower part
of the basin and the other the problem of the upper part.
Then
there are the problems of cities located along the major American
rivers, not infrequently directly on the very flood plains of
highly erratic streams. In the arid parts of the land it has
recently become clear that climate varies over time, with irregular
periods of serious drought followed by wet periods marked by
occasional floods. The problems of land and water, then, are
inherently difficult. For this reason alone, shortcomings and
failures have probably been inevitable. Moreover, in the scale
of the undertakings that have been attempted involving on occasion
no less than the reversal of stream flow and the altering of
the natural features of whole river basins, it is inevitable.
Nevertheless, the most startling fact about the history of water
projects in the United States is the degree to which their shortcomings
have been associated with administrative failures. Again and
again these shortcomings have proved to be the consequences of
inadequate study of water flow: of soil, of factors other than
construction technology and of faulty organization. In 1959,
the Senate Select Committee on National Water resources found
that twenty different national commissions or committees charged
with examining these problems and seeking solutions had emphasized
with remarkable consistency the need for coordination among agencies
dealing with water.
Let's take a second to follow
the set strategy.
1. Dissect the first paragraph.
One of the most persistently
troubling parts of national domestic policy is the development
and use of water resources. Because the technology of water management
involves similar construction skills, whether the task is the
building of an ocean jetty for protection of shipping or the
construction of a river dam for flood control and irrigation,
the issues of water policy have mingled problems of navigation
and agriculture. A further inherent complexity of water policy
is the frequent conflict between flood control and irrigation
between requirements for abundance and those for scarcity of
water. Both problems exist in America, often in the same river
basins; the one is most typically the problem of the lower part
of the basin and the other the problem of the upper part.
The main point is that there are problems with water management
that result from conflicts of interest between flood control,
irrigation, navigation and the upper/lower parts of the basin.
2. Create a mental road map.
Paragraph 1 is about the problems
with water management that result from conflicts of interest
between flood control, irrigation, navigation and the upper/lower
parts of the basin.
Paragraph 2 describes the effects
of floods, streams and other natural variances that add another
level of complexity to the issue.
Paragraph 3 describes how the
attempts to deal with these conflicts have been incompetently
managed. Note the use of strong phrase "startling."
It appears that the author's main point is in paragraph 3.
3. Stop to summarize the essay
Clearly, the author's
main intention of writing this essay is to reveal the incompetence
of agencies managing water. The first two paragraphs describe
the scale of the problem; the final paragraph describes the problems
faced in attempting to solve it.
4. Tackle the questions.
1. According to the passage,
the shortcomings of water projects in the U.S. are primarily
the consequences of?
a) conflict between flood control and irrigation
b) inadequate study and faulty coordination among agencies
c) Problems of land and water
d) inadequate construction technology
e) the scale of the projects
Explanation: The passage makes
it clear that the primary cause of the shortcomings of water
projects in the U.S. is (B) inadequate study and faulty coordination
among agencies. The passage does not refer to conflicts between
flood control, problems of land and water, inadequate construction
technology, or the scale of projects. The correct answer is (B).
Having the discipline to stick to the 4 point strategy pays off
here. We identified that the main point of the passage was incompetent
agencies in step 3. We used our knowledge that the author will
use strong language "startling... incompetence" to
identify his main point. The author's purpose here is to point
out bad management.
2. Of the issues named below,
which is more typically the problem of the upper part of a river
basin?
a) navigation
b) shipping
c) flood control
d) drought followed by wet period
e) scarcity
This is a simple recall question. The passage makes it clear
that in the lower part of the basin, flooding is the problem;
in the upper part, scarcity is the problem. Scarcity is the only
problem identified with the upper part of a basin. (A), (B),
(C), and (D) are irrelevant to this question and, as a result,
are incorrect. (E) is the correct answer.
3. Which of the following is not a problem associated with
the development of water resources?
a) a conflict between flood control and irrigation
b) problems of navigation and agriculture
c) location of cities on flood plains
d) inadequate design technology
e) variations in climate
The passage makes it plain that (A), conflict of purpose; (B),
practical problems of use; (C), vulnerability of cities on flood
plains; and (E), climatic variations, impede the development
of water resources. Design technology is not one of the impediments
identified by this passage. The correct answer is (D).
4. Which statement below may
be inferred from the information given in this passage?
a) The intersection of problems of climate, geography, purpose,
technology, and administration complicates the development of
water projects.
b) Innovative design and construction technology eliminate conflict
in demand for flood control and for irrigation.
c) In the design of a water project, upper and lower parts of
a river basin must be regarded as identical entities.
d) In the design of a water project, predominant problems derive
from the presence of erratic streams.
e) Irregularity of climate is the most critical impediment to
the development of water projects.
The passage makes it clear that
problems of climate, geography, purpose, and technology complicate
the development of water projects, but the most serious impediment
is inadequate study and faulty coordination. The inference in
(B) is wholly unsupported by the passage. (C) directly contradicts
the major scientific argument of the passage. The inferences
in (D) and (E) are not supported by information in the passage.
This question is easy to get because all of the concepts are
covered in the road map. The correct answer is (A).
Review
1. Dissect the introductory
paragraph.
Read the introductory paragraph in an active manner. Think through
the concepts while you are reading the text. What is the author's
point? What is he trying to prove?
2. Create a mental road map.
Diagram the organization of the passage.
3. Stop to summarize the essay.
Before answering the questions, take a few seconds to summarize
your mental road map.
4. Tackle the questions.
Answer the questions based on your mental road map of the passage.
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